Surrender
Giving my entire self
Vulnerable, naked and empty
Waiting for that moment of ecstatic release
Waves of warm love wash over my heart
Leaving me defenseless
Against you
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Poetry by Pamela 
And this is when you know you’ve truly found..
Love it
OHHHHHH this stirs such a deep sigh 🙂
Happy Friday….Happy Week End~
I hope your weekend is good too
we do make ourselves vulnerable when we open up to the other… they as well… it’s precious if we can..
its a beautiful risk…opening oneself up like that…knowing it can cause us pain
but then again the prize and pleasure of that love lies
on the other side of making that risk.
Hi Pamela, it is hard to give one’s entire self…..for sure…but if one does one is rewarded, I think. Sometimes one doesn’t realize this until one risks. I so often think about you. So glad to see you here.
Beautiful. The only way.
Thanks
….beautiful, Pamela, .rare indeed I think..
Thank you
Perfectly realised Pamela – a joy to read… With Best Wishes Scott http://www.scotthastie.com
Thank you
Beautiful musicality in this, Pamela.
Thank you
Profound in such brevity.
Thank you. I prefer the shorter poetry forms. It really makes me choose my words carefully
To surrender, to give one’s self completely is a very rare and special thing indeed. Brief but very concise.
Love it too.
I vaguely remember those wonderful days (and nights)…
Anna :o]
Steamy and well written, as always! it is in the moment of our vulnerability that we truly allow ourselves to be seen. It takes a brave soul to do that!
Lovely poem. I like short poems, too.
Beautiful.
Thank you
Simple, straight-forward expression of the courage it takes to really love.
beautiful – and risky !