Time spent together grows short
Soon you will be gone, my dear
I will wither and vanish
Without your sweet love
I’m trying to learn a new form of poetry. This is doidotsu. A 7-7-7-5 form, typically about love or humor.
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Poetry by Pamela 
I believe you nailed the form. Heavy, emotional poem too.
Thanks Charles.
One thing I noticed about new forms. You need ten fingers to do them. Nice job.
I like this poem very much.. I am useless with the different forms of poetry though so I thank you for educating me on this one! 🙂
Thank You for Sharing your Beautiful Words today and Blessing me with your Inspiration 🙂
This is a very good use of the poem form. Tenderness and anticipated longing together.
Interesting form. I might they it myself. Thanks for sharing Pam! 🙂
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A beautiful poem by Pamela!
Yeah….you tried it! This poignant. I can feel the emotion in each line! Well done!
Thanks.